Great Potential
This has some potential to be fleshed out into a full song.
I like the style you used to "demolish" the drum set. Once the pad came in, I thought that you could get a pretty good full track out of this. Maybe add in some little ticking and bleeping synths, nothing too melodic, and you've got yourself a winner! No need to make it like four minutes, either; sometimes if you try too hard, length doesn't help it. Two to three minutes or so is often good enough, especially if you've got a full album of material like this.
Nice.
4/5
SyntheticProsthetic